I Broke Down 29 Cold DMs And OnlyFans Agency Profiles And What I Saw Was Disgusting

When I first started my OnlyFans agency, I had the same question that all newbies have:

“How the f*ck do I find models?”

To me, the task seemed insurmountable.

You mean I have to convince some girl to:

• Create a bunch of social media content
• Take naked pictures of herself
• Send me those naked pictures
• Give me access to her OnlyFans account
• Let me put a bank account that I control on her OnlyFans
• Agree to give me at least 50% of the profits

And I have to do this not once, but MULTIPLE times?

Yikes.

Fortunately, I had a sales background.

I conveniently remembered that this was just another numbers game.

I knew that if I sent out enough messages, I would eventually find a girl who would be willing to do everything on that list.

And if I REALLY tightened up my game, I would find WAY more than one.

So why is it then that some newbies STRUGGLE for MONTHS to recruit even a single girl?

Instead of answering this question directly (what would be the fun in that?), I decided to dig through one of my old model’s Instagram accounts and take a look at some of their outreach.

Normally, I would just ignore these messages.

I don’t even think I even glanced at them.

But now that I provide help for agencies that struggle with recruiting, I figured I might as well give you guys some advice on how to properly approach models.

After all, who likes spinning their wheels for months with no results?

I know I don’t.

In this article, I’m going to be posting my analysis of 20+ outgoing messages, agency IG accounts, and their accompanying websites.

⚠️ ⚠️ ⚠️ IMPORTANT NOTE BEFORE WE BEGIN⚠️ ⚠️ ⚠️ 

I’ve decided not to redact any information in these articles.

Normally I do, but not in this one. Not only are all of these profiles public, but the chats don’t contain any sensitive information.

You might see some outlandish claims and fuzzy earnings screenshots, but in my opinion this is fair play. 

ALSO, in case any of these agencies end up reading this article, let me make this clear: any criticism of the profiles or outreach in these screenshots is purely professional.

Take it at face value. Or don’t and get big mad, your choice.

Example #1 – Get To The Point!

In this example, our lovely young friend here sends a very vague series of opening messages.

“Hey. I have a business question.”

Ok, so?

Do you think any of these girls give a flying f*ck about your question, my curly-haired Zoomer friend?

Why would they care at all about answering some random nobody’s question?

Sure, maybe if you’re famous.

But Zoomdawg here with the no cap fr fr haircut clearly doesn’t have much social clout.

Not to mention that he doesn’t use proper punctuation or capitalization in his messages, either.

I don’t bring that up because I’m a grammar nazi, but because it looks unprofessional.

Everything about this is just gross.

And if we look at his profile…

Think about it: does this gentleman look like the type of guy you would want to do business with in any capacity?

Put a KFC uniform on him and I wouldn’t be surprised if he took my order at the drive-thru window.

No suit, no fancy office, no social proof – nothing that makes him look particularly businesslike or trustworthy.

Do you think models are going to trust him either?

Unlikely.

Also, the username has nothing to do with OnlyFans, models, agency, recruiting, or anything.

The bio only has an email address.

It’s like this guy isn’t even trying.

Example #2 – Irrelevant Posts On The Wall

Compared to the last one, this one is much better, but still leaves a lot to be desired.

For one thing, the username has nothing to do with OnlyFans, agencies, modeling, or any of the other keywords that would let models know they are being contacted by a real agency.

Think for a second: do you think a REAL agency is going to have the name of their agency in their username or not?

WTF is “neatplug”?

It sounds like it’s a play on words for some kind of drug dealer, which in and of itself isn’t a problem, but this is supposed to be an OnlyFans agency.

Regarding the message itself, there are a few issues:

For one thing, they didn’t use the creator’s name in the outreach.

Girls aren’t stupid – they know you’re sending the exact same message to a bazillion other people.

Aside from the poor formatting (not properly double-spaced), there are randomly capitalized words (“Grow”) where there shouldn’t be.

This, plus the wild claims (with no proof) make the message seem non-credible.

Let’s take a look at his profile…

Can someone explain to me why this page – which is supposed to be for an OnlyFans agency – is full of Family Guy memes?

What does that have ANYTHING to do with OnlyFans?

Models will take one look at this and immediately be confused.

And if there’s one thing you NEVER want to do to your customer, it is to confuse them.

When you pitch someone, their mind is RACING to look for ANYTHING that will allow them to write off what you’re selling as unworthy of their attention.

A sense of confusion will give them the perfect opportunity to do this.

Also, I highly doubt the owner of this account is Will Smith. Why isn’t there any branding in the profile image?

And the bio? Just an email address.

Yeah bro, they’re definitely going to want to be managed by you after watching your Family Guy memes.

Example #3 – Generic Opening Message

This next one actually does a few things right.

First of all, we know just by looking at the username that it is an AGENCY.

Crazy that some people would get this wrong, but it is what it is.

Second, the opening message is short and sweet and to the point.

THIS opening message, as we’ll see in the rest of this article, is PLAYED OUT.

Popularized by OBH, this opening message has now been spammed to every single OnlyFans model at least 50 times.

As soon as they see it, they immediately screen you out as “just another fake agency.”

Even if you’re not fake, they will lump you in with the rest of the fake ones because you are using a non-unique opening message.

One thing I DID like about this opening message is that they used the name of the OnlyFans creator.

Another thing I like is that they identified themselves with their name.

People want to know who they’re talking to.

I wouldn’t have chosen the name “Manu” (I believe you should always choose an Anglo-sounding name), but it’s better than not identifying yourself.

 

I also kind of like what they’ve done with their posts here.

This is a common tactic that I think is underused by agencies – creating one large image with all the posts on the wall.

The reason I like this is because it delivers a FAST hit of information to the model without her having to look through a bunch of posts.

There is effectively ONLY one post here.

Also, when you have your page set up like this, it doesn’t really matter if you have no engagement on your posts .

Obviously nobody is going to engage with 1/9 of a larger image.

On the other hand, the bio is wea – mainly because it doesn’t really tell the model what the benefit to her will be.

Okay, you do SMM – but what does that mean for me?

What does “We will do it for you” mean?

You will do WHAT for me, exactly? And why should I care?

Oh, you’re making me think?

You send ME a message and now you expect me to THINK?

It should be IMMEDIATELY obvious to your models EXACTLY what the benefit is to them when they read your bio.

If we scroll down a little bit, we can see a little more of the image.

It looks somewhat professional (even though the text is a little large and overbearing in my opinion).

I want to point out that in this image, the text does a much better job of explaining exactly what the benefit to the model is.

“Skyrocket your monthly income and take your OnlyFans success to the next level…”

It’s not perfect, but at least it’s MORE clear than what they wrote in the bio.

Example #4 – Opening Message Is A Wall Of Text

One thing you’ll notice in my articles is that they are very READABLE.

Personally, I view writing as a form of visual art.

The words on the page aren’t just there for you get information.

They need to be “dressed up” so they’re pleasing to look at.

This is why I make AMPLE use of formatting like bold, italics, underline, and CAPITALIZATION.

Most importantly, this is why I use VERY short paragraphs in my posts.

For any aspiring writers out there, this is how I’m able to get away with writing such long posts.

FORMATTING is important.

And the formatting in this outreach is awful.

I don’t even want to read this guy’s message because the act of simply trying to navigate his wall of text would cause me great effort.

And if it causes ME – an inspired genius – great effort, just imagine what it will do to the smooth-brained models you are trying to recruit.

Also, if someone can’t format an opening message properly, it makes me think they either:

1. Don’t understand how they are perceived
2. Don’t understand how to approach customers
3. Don’t care about how their messaging is received

None of these are good options.

I won’t even go over the content of the outreach because with 0/10 formatting, it’s completely irrelevant.

Unsurprisingly, his actual profile is very low effort as well.

Only 6 posts on the grid instead of 9.

No real explanation about what they do.

And the bio suffers from the same problem as the last one: it doesn’t clearly state what the benefit is for the model.

Okay, you’re a modeling agency. So what?

Good for you?

Just for fun I clicked on their agency page.

Why am I not surprised?

Example #5 – Confusing Opening Message

There’s one thing that I like about this account: they make it very clear that they are an ONLYFANS MANAGEMENT AGENCY.

Other than that, it’s awful.

Look, I understand that not everyone is a native English speaker.

And it’s very likely that the models you will be reaching out to are ALSO not native English speakers.

But when an English-speaking person reads a text with grammatical and spelling errors, we automatically think the person must be an idiot.

(I realize this is unique to native English speakers, but it’s still something to keep in mind.)

That said, this opening message does an okay job of conveying what the value is (“10x your profits”), but it doesn’t really take into account the level that the creator may be at beforehand.

How do you know the model is making any money?

What if the model is already clearing $10k/month?

I understand that the “10x” has become an ubiquitous expression in the marketing world, but that’s exactly the problem.

Also, not addressing the creator by name makes it look like a spam message.

Decent pictures on the profile, but what the hell is up with that bio?

“You make money, we do all the rest.”

What?

You guys have to understand something.

Like I said before, girls are just LOOKING for a reason to blow you off.

Any reason will do, even one that isn’t even true.

If they read something that doesn’t make sense to them, they’ll think you’re an idiot and move on.

Your bio and posts are like your LANDING PAGE.

When you drive traffic to a landing page, you want to make sure that sh*t is in tip top shape.

People who run paid ads know this, which is why a lot of successful agency owners come from businesses that have already run paid ad campaigns.

They know that first impressions matter.

Example #6 – Our First Decent Account

Okay, finally we found one that does things halfway decent.

First things first: it’s clear from the username that this account is somehow connected to models.

It’s not such a huge jump in logic to assume they’re a modeling agency.

Second thing I like is that they used the creator’s name in the introduction. Bravo!

Third, the message is formatted with line breaks and easy to read.

The message itself seems a little fake (“Big fan of your work on social media!”), but these girls probably already assume you’re copy-pasting this crap anyway.

I mean really, you’re a big fan of what they’re doing? What are you a fan of, exactly?

Still, this is pretty much the best one we’ve seen so far.

The bio is also decently done with a VERY clear expression of value:

“We help creators 4x their income within 6  months.”

There’s no room for misinterpretation there. You know EXACTLY what these guys are claiming to do.

Also, Paris is a cool-sounding location.

I shouldn’t be surprised that the first decent page we’ve seen comes from France. French people are very concerned with image.

Just out of curiousity, I clicked the other username in their profile to see what it was like, and found this:

It looks like essentially the same thing, but with more followers.

219k followers is a sizable investment for an IG page, but I’m sure they use it for outreach as well.

I’ve seen this strategy used before, not sure how it works.

But considering the professionalism of the rest of this account, I would assume it works pretty well.

Just for funsies, I clicked the link in their bio.

No real information, just a lead capture form.

I didn’t click on the menu bars, so it’s possible they may have additional info listed somewhere.

Personally, I’m not a fan of putting a lead capture form as the link on the account.

I’ve never gotten good results with it.

It’s VERY unlikely that girls are going to fill out their details to be contacted from accounts like these.

Don’t get me wrong, it looks good. But there’s just not enough credibility established.

This is why I personally prefer to link to an actual website that explains more about our offering.

Realistically, girls are not going to fill out the form.

Unless you are posting links to actual creators, have video testimonials, and are UNDENIABLY a real account, girls are not going to throw themselves at your agency.

I would change this to a one-page agency website – or better yet, an infosite – that establsihes more credibility and trust.

But other than that, well done.

Example #7 – Not Committing To The Bit

This account ALMOST gets it right, but stops just short.

• Let’s ignore the fact that the opening message spelled Jennifer incorrectly.
• Let’s also ignore that they also didn’t capitalize OnlyFans.
• Let’s ALSO ignore that the message is so long that it would require scrolling down to read it all.
• Let’s ALSO ignore the fact that their username has nothing to do with models or agencies.

All that aside, they did an okay job.

This message looks like a verbal explanation of what you should actually do, with no attention paid to detail.

Still, the value add is clear (“make 6-7 figures on OnlyFans”) and outrageous enough that it is worth NOT writing them off immediately as a bunch of amateurs.

After clicking on the profile, the first thing I noticed were these very professional looking pictures of these girls.

What I LIKE about this is that the first six pictures all have a similar look and feel.

When I saw this, I thought, “Oh wow, maybe these girls really ARE his models.

I decided to click on one of the posts.

Imagine my disappointment when I saw that there was no link to Kaz’s profile.

My brother, if you are going to post a bunch of girls on your profile and CLAIM that they are yours, then why wouldn’t you link to their IG profiles?

If you want to go that route, then get off your lazy ass and create 6 fake IG profiles for each of these girls.

Of course, that means you have to create a fake OnlyFans for them as well.

And bot fake likes or get fake followers.

This account FAILS because it did not fully commit to the lie it was telling.

At first glance, it appears to be something impressive. But after a small amount of digging, it’s clear that it’s just another faker.

Example #8 – Another Pleasing Aesthetic From A French Agency

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This next example also does most things right.

• Mention the creator’s name in the outreach? Check.
• Make it clear from the username that it’s a modeling agency? Check.
• Proper spelling and punctuation (mostly)? Check.

What I’m not a fan of here is the outreach message itself.

OBH’s opener isn’t BAD. It WAS one the best openers I’d ever used… 6 months ago.

Now that everyone and their mother knows who OBH is, this opener is overused and has lost its effectiveness.

Still, so far so good.

After clicking on the profile, we see an aesthetically pleasing top 9 posts.

What I like about this is that the images of the girls are glamorous and depict the type of lifestyle future models may lead if they were to become successful.

The text posts are all motivating and encouraging – always a plus.

The bio is also good, but I would be a little more specific in the value add.

“We help driven content creators increase their earnings through time-tested strategies” is good, but could be more specific.

An increase in earnings could be an increase of $1.

Nitpicking perhaps, but word choice matters.

Also, I’d like to point out here that this agency is ALSO French.

Are French people natural-born OnlyFans agency owners? I’m starting to think so…

Their website is also pretty good.

It has lots of information and an Apply Now button as well.

Unfortunately, when I clicked theApply Now button, it prompted me to log into my Google account.

This extra step causes unnecessary friction that will prevent models from actually applying.

Still, it’s very unlikely that any model would apply through their site without first speaking to the owner of the account anyway, so the point is somewhat moot.

Except for the opening message, this one was pretty good.

Example #9 – Why So Unprofessional?

Zoomer readers of mine, heed my words.

If you are a business ower, be professional.

I don’t care what you sell, you will sell more of it if you act like a professional.

And professionals don’t start their conversations with “Sup!”

Hello, Hi, Hey – there is nothing wrong with these to open a conversation.

“Sup” immediately identifies you as someone who is inexperienced in business.

Can you overcome this bad first impression? Yes.

But why put yourself at a disadvantage so early on?

All that aside, the content of the message is pretty run-of-the-mill stuff you see from agencies.

It’s written properly – which is a plus – and the value add is somewhat clear.

But in my opinion, they are getting WAY too ahead of themselves in the opening message.

Using the words “risk-free” has the same effect as saying, “This isn’t a scam” – psychologically.

It’s not good.

Same thing with “pay nothing out of pocket.”

Let’s look at the account itself.

However, aside from the poor choice of greeting and wall-of-text-y oureach, this one is alright.

First off, the value add is clear in the bio (“You create the content, we do the rest.”)

Let’s talk about this young man’s post content.

So what I like about it is that he actually had the balls to post a video of himself (definitely worth a watch) saying why models should choose to work with his agency.

Not only is this a Big Boy Move, but it adds tremendous amounts of credibility to the agency itself.

He seems confident and looks like he also knows what he’s talking about.

That said, I’d recommend he clean up his appearance a little bit and shoot his promo video in a well-lit studio instead of on a dark rooftop.

It seems like he just paid some guy $20 to buy him and his friends a couple 40s, sparked a blunt, and was like, “This would be a perfect time for me to record a promo video for my OnlyFans agency!”

It’s entirely possible this kid makes big money with OF, but his appearance doesn’t inspire confidence.

I took a quick look at their website too.

It actually looks pretty good.

All in all, this one was decent, but what it lacks is professionalism.

You may think that just because you make a bunch of money with OF, that your digital presence doesn’t matter.

You may still be able to recruit through word of mouth, but to ignore aesthetics when approaching models is a big mistake.

In my opinion, what saves this account is the video of the owner talking to the camera.

Pitching the agency as the pet-project of a young marketing prodigy can be a very attractive angle.

But models are very unlikely to want to do business with bare-faced teenagers who appear to be unaware of how they’re perceived on their own social media accounts.

Food for thought.

Example #10 –  Just Another Boring Agency

This agency does a great job of playing it safe.

Their opening message is formatted decently, sort of explains the value add, and makes it very clear why the model is being contacted.

However, there’s nothing about it that stands out from the other agencies.

In fact, the only thing that stands out to ME is that they don’t make any major mistakes in the otureach.

Sure, they fail to mention the creator’s name in the message.

But at this point, we all know that these messages are hastily copy and pasted to hundreds of girls per day.

In general, you want to do SOMETHING in your opening message to make it stand out.

(Preferably in a good way.)

Posts on the page look decent. Not the best I’ve seen, but again, not terrible.

What is the purpose of using the FIRST and most VALUABLE sentence on the bio to say:

“Official Page Of The Loca Modeling Agency.”

Like, so what? Who cares?

I can tell you who DOESN’T care – the model you’re trying to pitch.

She cares about what’s in it for her.

Not a huge fan of the bit.ly link either, which I assume they are using so they can track stats from this IG page.

It just doesn’t look right.

You are the official page of an agency and you don’t know how to install Google Analytics on your site?

Models are unlikely to think this, but it will jar them somewhat to see a bit.ly link instead of an actual website link.

The page in question:

Okay, so you’re a big famous super successful modeling agency, and you can’t afford $10 for a domain?

Why on God’s green earth are you using a subdomain on wix?

Immediate loss of all credibility.

You’re saying that you can successfully promote models, chat with fans, and do alllll the other stuff needed to make a bazillion dollars a month.

But you CAN’T set up a website on your own domain?

Or PAY someone to do it for you?

Just not it my dude.

Example #11 – What’s The Catch?

If any of you are interested in mastering sales (which all of you SHOULD be), then I highly recommend you pick up the book, “Never Split The Difference,” by Chris Voss.

As an ex-FBI hostage negotiator, Voss developed a system of negotiating that goes against all the traditional sales training you’ve heard before.

Most sales training tells you to ask your customer questions that will tease a “yes” out of them.

The problem with hunting for “yes” answers is sales, as Voss explains, is that people are hesitant to answer Yes Questions because they’re afraid they will be pigeon-holed into agreeing with something that is not in their best interest.

Take this message for example.

The logical answer to this question is “yes.”

But if the model were to answer with a yes, that would to imply she’d be interested in having a call with this mysterious gentleman.

Whether or not someone says “yes” to your offer is not just about how good your offer is.

Anyone can promise the world.

And as we’ve seen, models get tons of similar-sounding messages from agencies all the time who all promise big bucks yet look like scammers.

This is why OBH’s opener worked so well.

The answer we’re looking for to the “are you already represented” question isn’t yes, but no.

We WANT the model to say, “No, I’m not represented.”

Which is much more comfortable to HER than saying YES to the question, “Do you want to do big numbers with your OF?”

Do you understand?

I understand the logic behind the “how-to” posts on the page, but like everything else, you need to make sure it’s done well.

It looks pretty amateurish to me.

You have to understand something here too: these girls don’t understand that you can be awful at graphic design and amazing at driving traffic.

This guy might very well do big numbers for his girls, but he’s not doing himself any favors by having his first three posts look like they were made by an uninspired Indian on Fiverr.

Website looks decent, I guess.

But with what I mentioned in the previous sections, will it be enough?

And will it even matter when they do?

Example #12 – Get To The Point

No offense to any of my German readers out there, but you guys are WAY too logical.

Similar to the last account I reviewed (which was also German, by the way), this outreach is trying to trap the model into agreeing to something that she may not want to agree with.

Here’s what she is thinking:

“If I tell him I want to achieve great things on OnlyFans, then he’s going to want to set up a call with me. I’m not sure I’m ready for that because I DON’T KNOW WHO TF HE IS.”

That’s the big thing we’re missing from nearly all of these accounts (except the Zoom Zoom in example #9): TRUST.

Not a single one of these business owners had the guts to show us their face.

Why boyos? What are you so afraid of?

You’re asking these girls to show their naughty bits to the entire world, but you won’t even disclose your identity to them?

That said, this opening message is vague in that it doesn’t get to the damn point.

Who doesn’t want to achieve great things?

What’s your damn point?

Account looks decent.

But if I’m a model looking at this and I get 10 DMs a day, I’m going to look for something that sets these guys apart.

Aside from three pinned posts that describe their services, I don’t see much.

Again, same problem as before.

First of all, why are the quotation marks at the bottom of the word instead of the top. Is that a German thing?

Second, that quote is lame as f*ck.

Third, WHO ARE YOU?

Yes, we know you’re the CEO. But who is that?

Show me your face and maybe I’ll trust you.

Example #13 – If You’re Going To Do A Voice Message, Do It Right

Alright, FINALLY something a little more interesting.

First off, let me say that I LOVE using voice notes when doing recruiting.

Aside from sending an actual video, nothing helps build credibility more than the model hearing what you sound like.

However, if you sound like the guy in this voice note, you might want to practice your pitch a little bit beforehand.

This German gentleman – Dulum? – is about as charming as a wet pair of socks.

I know exactly what he’s thinking, too.

“MOST guys are probably just sending texts. If I send a voice note, she’ll be impressed because she never gets voice notes!”

And while he is on the right track, his executionn is so bad that he lost any advantage he might have had by sending a voice note.

For one thing, he doesn’t say the creator’s name, so she will think that this is just another copy/pasted message.

Second, his cadence is what I would expect of an insecure 13 year old asking out his crush for the school dance over the phone.

My dude, where is your confidence?

Put your best radio announcer voice on and try it again.

Looking at his profile and “website” respectively, we can see they’re both extremely low effort.

Not only does the website not even load, but it’s hosted on a subdomain of a site that has nothing to do with his agency.

Very unprofessional.

The page also looks awful.

Example #14 – The Strokeposter

This example makes me think the agency owner has either had a stroke, or was in the middle of having a stroke when he wrote this message.

Chriss – not Chris, but Chriss – wants to know if we want to be one of his ONLYFANS MODELS.

WELL THAT’S VERY INTERESTING CHRIS THANKS FOR ASKING.

REALLY APPRECIATE YOU TAKING THE TIME TO SEND A MESSAGE.

Ok ok, to be fair he didn’t capslock the entire thing.

But what is the reason for emphasizing those words?

It shows poor communication skills.

And if that didn’t activate your almonds, then the next paragraph surely will.

“Let me know if you are introduced!”

I assume he meant, “interested.”

But if you can’t even take the time to spellcheck the copy/pasted outreach you’re spamming to a bazillion girls, then I’m sorry Chriss, but you need to step up your game.

Unsurprisingly, his page is also low effort.

And if I had a dollar for every time I saw the Bunny Agency’s bio pasted into another agency’s profile (“We increase profit and reduce effort!”), I’d have a lot of dollars.

Why would you put such little effort into something that you’ll be using so much?

Example #15 – Don’t Close On The Open

When I was very young, someone told me something about women that I never forgot:

“Women are like a frying pan – they need to be hot before you put the meat in them.”

Selling a product – in this case representation by your agency – is very similar.

Telling some bullsh*t story in a DM is not going to get you there, especially if the girl has not heard of you.

Here’s my point: DO NOT PUSH FOR A PHONE CALL IN THE OPENING MESSAGE.

ToddV – one of my favorite dating coaches – calls this, “trying to close on the open.”

Why? What’s your rush? How come you’re so desperate?

Ok, you told your little story – but don’t you want to know something about this model before you try to get her on a call?

• What if she’s a psycho?
• What if she’s unreliable?
• What if she’s impossible to work with?

These girls know this – not just from their communication with agencies, but because this is how guys behave with them all the time.

If you show a girl you like her before you get to know her, she will usually lose interest in you.

She’ll think, “Oh, he just wants to f*ck me. He doesn’t know anything about me.”

Don’t be that guy.

Their profile, on the other hand, actually looks pretty good.

Very aesthetically pleasing.

Personally, I would choose to post pictures of models that look like the type you’d like to recruit.

But that’s just me.

Aside from stealing the Bunny Agency’s bio, their page looks decent.

 

Their “website” is just a Google form.

Yes, it’s a nice looking Google form. But it’s still a Google form.

I’ve said it before but I’ll say it again.

I don’t like putting a form as the website link because you miss out on a valuable opportunity to give the model more information about your operation.

This is an excellent opportunity to show that you know your stuff, which I assume these guys do.

The model wants to know you are competent.

After she verifies your competence, she will examine your credibility.

Example #16 – Using A Female Account To Recruit

This account takes a unique approach – they use a female account to do their recruiting.

I’ve heard good things about this method, but have never been able to execute it properly on my own.

I always have better luck with the personal + agency combination.

Still, I do know someone who does well using female accounts.

However, he puts much more care into them than this young “lady” does.

The message itself is a little bit wall-of-text-y, but at least it is mostly free of grammatical and spelling errors.

 

Looking at the account, however, I am very disappointed.

Now look, I know everyone has to start somewhere.

But if you don’t have any ACTUAL results, at least do a good job of pretending you are a successful agency.

This is not a good attempt at pretending at all.

If this was a real person, don’t you think they would have some actual information in their bio about who they were?

WTF is “Chi” supposed to mean?

No story highlights, no posts, no nothing.

It’s possible they’re just using mass DMs (which would explain tagging the other profile in the outreach), in which case it’s irrelevant.

But I doubt this is the case because the sender identified themselves by their first name.

So unless they’ve got a very sophisticated bot that allows them to input the sender’s first name AND the model’s first name in the message, this was likely done by an actual person.

It’s possible they have a nice agency IG and website, but with such an ugly outreach account, who would even bother to look them up?

Example #17 – Not Offering Enough Value

During my career in sales, I’ve noticed that the more I can get a customer to emotionally invest in the conversation, the more likely they are to buy.

This is most evident when I try to sell hair extensions – our highest ticket item.

Selling extensions is a much longer sales process than a tool like a flat iron because we need to fit the extensions to their head, style them, and make them look good.

This leaves us with a lot of extra time to spend with the customer that we have to fill with conversation.

Doing a demo in silence is a great way to not sell anything.

I solve this problem in one of two ways:

1. I crack jokes and make them laugh
2. I ask them questions about themselves to get them talking

If I’m feeling especially charming that day (and I see they’re receptive to my antics), I’ll pick the first option.

If I’m not, then I’ll choose the second option.

When you get someone to talk about themselves, they naturally lower their defenses.

As strange as it sounds, if you spend an hour with someone and they talk about themselves the entire time, they will come out of the interaction thinking that you are a super cool guy.

This is why on dates, you should always let the girl do 90% of the talking.

A good way to tell if you’ve done a good job (on a date) is if, an hour or two in, you hear the magic words:

“I feel like you know everything about me, but I know nothing about you.”

Yes darling, because at their core people just want to talk about themselves.

Our buddy Jack here has the opposite approach.

He tries to pique interest and then get the GIRL to ask HIM questions.

But WHY should she care about HIM?

Just because he claims that he “can help grow there (spelling alert) account and get better results within a month or two”?

Brother… you can’t even be bothered to spellcheck your bio?

This agency has your name on it for goodness sakes. Don’t you think you should take a little more pride in it?

And again, it’s possible Jack is a Super Mega Ultra G and can make his girls $50k/month with a snap of his fingers.

But who would trust a business that had spelling mistakes in their bio?

If they’re that careless with their own digital footprint, it stands to reason they’d do an even WORSE job on someone else’s.

Example #18 – Be Creative And Set Yourself Apart

I’ve said it a million times – if you’re sending outreach on Instagram, you need to do something to set your agency apart from the rest.

This account does a great job of that.

Well, their outreach message does.

Let’s deconstruct this first image…

The initial message identified the creator by name, PLUS gave a compliment that doesn’t even sound generic.

What I really like about this one was that the second message was a cliffhanger – designed to get the model to respond.

“AND what?”

When she didn’t respond after 24 hours, he sent another message.

This one was much longer and more targeted – probably some variation of his follow up anyway.

Lots of good things about the rest of this message too. I wouldn’t be surprised if this guy has a copywriting background.

For one thing, notice the short sentences. Very readable.

Another good thing about it is that he pre-emptively identifies an objection, which is ALWAYS preferable to your customer bringing it up.

“Of course you have doubts at this stage. You don’t know us.”

Probably exactly what a model would think.

From there, he posts a few fuzzy earnings screenshots which I think are unnecessary.

Personally, I don’t send any earnings screenshots unless girls ask to see proof.

It seems very tryhard and besides, girls know that these can be faked as well.

Aside from that, I’m not a fan of the whole “double your income in X amount of time with Y less work.”

You don’t know how much this girl is making. Maybe she’s making $20, so who cares if you double it?

Another thingn I don’t like is the fact that he mentioned that it’s a Swiss agency.

Why is that relevant?

This “agency” profile page did make me a little confused though.

The three top pictures are good, but why are they there?

Is this an agency or is it a personal profile?

I’m not saying that you can’t post pictures of yourself on your agency page.

You are the owner of the company, you can absolutely do that.

But the top three posts are prime real estate. Why would you want to occupy them with pictures of yourself?

They are “good” pictures, sure.

But the most recent one is nearly a year old.

I just don’t get it.

One thing I will say about this agency is that they have the nicest website out of all the other agencies that I’ve reviewed so far.

It was SO nice that I even took this screen recording to show you how nice it was.

Very comprehensive, full of info, and does a good job showing that they are at least thorough.

Even if all the info is fake, it should at least look nice.

Think of your online presence as if it were a woman’s body: we don’t care if it’s fake as long as it looks good.

Example #19 – Maintain A Strong Frame

I might be crazy, but I read this in my head with a German accent.

It’s just so… STRAIGHTFORWARD.

It’s like bro, at least buy me dinner before you try to put the moves on me.

Anyway, there’s a lot I don’t like about this, but the worst part is the last sentence.

“…or if you don’t trust us, then please ignore us!”

Gentlemen, I have news for you.

NONE OF THESE GIRLS WILL TRUST YOU.

None. Zero. Nada.

Not a single one.

It is up to you as the agency owner to gain their trust.

The way you do this is by stacking SO MANY pieces of evidence in your favor that her smooth female brain has no choice but to accept the fact that you are, in fact, the real dea.

Here’s the reality: women are simultaneously DYING to reject you but also DYING to believe that you are the real deal.

Statistically speaking, 99% of men – agency owners or not – have bad game and will make a bad impression.

She’s so used to getting approached by idiots that she begins to automatically expect that every man that approaches her is an idiot by default.

However, females experience powerful curiousity. And she will check you out if you maintain a strong frame.

Also, please note the difference between the following sentences:

1. If you don’t trust us, then please ignore us.
2. If you don’t like us, then don’t respond.
3. If you’re not interested, no worries.

Which one do you think conveys the STRONGEST sense of abundance?

I mean… really bro?

The f*ck is this sh*t?

This guy looks like he took a break from milking cows on his rural plantation in Bavaria to whip up an EXTREMELY low effort agency page.

And what the hell is that bio?

Sure, that quote is nice for a t-shirt or Instagram story.

But you are allegedly a business that exists for the purpose of generating profits.

What the hell does the quote have to do with agencies, modeling, or OnlyFans?

Very low effort and disappointing.

Example #20 – Offer A Free Month Of Management

This account took an interesting approach to their outreach by offering a free month of management for potential models.

I remember reading in a chat long ago by a very successful agency owner that there are two ways to go about recruiting as a beginner:

1. Be the best bullsh*t artist in the world
2. Admit that you’re new and have no idea what you’re doing

Everyone tries to do the first option, most of the time very badly.

Very few people do the second one.

I realize that this agency owner wasn’t explicitly admitting that he was new, but I’d be willing to bet that he was.

Doing alllll the work required to run an OnlyFans for a model for free for a month?

What could the point of that possibly be other than to get experience?

I’m not crazy about this idea because it implies lack of investment on the girl’s part. 

I don’t like the bio being in Spanish.

English is the international language, not Spanish.

Furthermore my dude, your outreach messages were in English.

So why is your bio in Spanish?

You obviously speak English.

I don’t get it.

Example #21 – Using A Female Profile 2.0

Here we see the return of the agency that I reviewed a few examples ago: Dia Models.

In this outreach, the agency owner is using a female account as a “talent scout.”

The message itself isn’t amazing – although he does get points for using the creator’s name in the intro.

Plus it is short, sweet, and to the point.

If you are going to do outreach with female accounts, this is a much better way to do it than what we saw earlier.

At first glance, the account seems real.

Lots of pictures of an actual girl doing things that girls do – i.e. flexing on social media.

There are some specific details in the bio about who she is (“Vienna”) and mention of the agency she works for.

The one issue with running “scout” accounts like this that pretend to be real girls is that you have to do as much as you can do make them look like they are actually real accounts.

• A few pictures on the wall are nice, but what about stories?
• What about more story highlights?
• Where are her friends?
• Why aren’t her friends commenting on her pictures?

It’s not that it looks fake per se, it just doesn’t look 100% real.

I also would have liked to see a link to the agency.

She is a scout after all, isn’t she?

Still, a much better effort.

Example #22 – Source: Trust Me Bro

When I was in the army in Israel, I would occassionally go to a local masseuse to work the knots out of my back.

As I entered the massage room one day, I remember taking my shirt off and throwing it on the floor.

The masseuse – one of these battle-scarred old Russian guys – reprimanded me.

“Why’d you throw this on the floor? You never want your space to be messy. What you have on the outside is what you have on the inside.”

It doesn’t translate exactly from Hebrew, but a good corollary would be: “How you do one thing is how you do all things.”

When models get outreach messages like this with poor grammar, awful punctuation, run on sentences, walls of text, and very little self awareness, they assume that you obviously have no idea how to manage an account.

In reality, it’s totally possible that “Amina” and Triumph Management are l337 h4x0r5 extraordinaire and can push millions of users to a model’s OF page.

But when they present themselves so poorly in an outreach message, it’s very unlikely that anyone will give them the chance.

Not to mention that their username has absolutely nothing to do with an agency, OnlyFans, or modeling.

Looking at their profile doesn’t inspire much hope either.

One stock photo of a sunsuet and palm trees, no bio, no story highlights… really?

Why so low effort?

I’ll tell you this: every time I set up a new IG account for one of my VAs, it takes me about 15 minutes from start to finish.

And I already have all the pictures all the pictures and story highlights.

It just takes me that long to put them all where they’re supposed to be.

Yes, it’s a pain in the ass.

But I know that the extra time I spend to make the page look nice will pay dividends in the future when my VAs are sending messages.

A little bit more work up front will do wonders to improve your results.

Example #23 – Hi,You Suck. Please Respond.

When I lived in New Zealand, I had to travel 40 minutes every day by bus to get to and from work.

With over an hour and a half of dead time, I knew I had to do something to keep myself occupied.

I torrented a dozen very long sales trainings and made it a point to listen to them every day.

One of the best ones that I listened to was a sales training program by none other than the legend himself, Tony Robbins.

A key concept that he brought up was this:

In order to make the customer want to buy, you need to first show them that they have a problem.

People buy things to solve problems.

Sometimes they’re aware of the problem, sometimes they aren’t.

It’s your job as the seller to make the buyer aware that they have a problem which you – as the agency – can solve.

This is kind of what our friend in this example is trying to do.

“Why are you not in the 0.1%?”

Okay… but how does he know that is this person’s specific problem?

• Maybe their problem is that their TikTok accounts keep getting banned?
• Maybe their problem is that they can’t think of content ideas to create?
• Maybe their problem is that they are overwhelmed trying to chat with all their fans?

Being in the 0.1% in and of itself isn’t a problem.

Also, I found this very German of him:

“If you have any questions, please ask now.”

Yes, I have a question: why on earth did you think this would be a good prompt?

A model will see this and immediately think, “This guy has no game whatsoever.”

I’ll write an article about this in the future, but while you are absolutely responsible for putting money in your models’ bank accounts, you still have to “game” them much like you would game a girl you are dating.

It’s no surprise here that the bio and profile are virtually nonexistent as well.

Many times, agency owners will set up these satellite accounts to do outreach and put very little effort into them.

Their reasoning is, “Well it’s just an outreach account. I don’t need to make it look nice. They’ll understand.”

No, they won’t.

And even if they do understand on a logical level, their initial visceral reaction to seeing an ugly and unprofessional looking page will override any logical thoughts they have.

This is why movies have the effect on us that they do.

We know it’s not real, but when we see the main character’s best friend die, it still makes us feel a sense of loss.

We don’t stop to think, “This is just a movie. Those people are actors. I shouldn’t feel sad, so I won’t!”

We instinctively react to what we see.

Any model who sees this will be grossed out and move on.

Example #24 – Tell Them If You Suck At English

The trade shows that I work follow a natural progression:

1. On Friday, I try to sell as much as I can so that I can start the show off right. This usually ends to me expending WAY too much energy on the slowest day of the weekend.
2. On Saturday – the best day – I am already fatigued, but thanks to lots of caffeine and sales-induced dopamine spikes, I am amped and full of energy.
3. Sunday is usually when I crash.

As a result, my demos lack the pizzaz that they have on the other two days.

I mess up my demo, say dumb sh*t, and make mistakes.

If I do something especially egregious, I’ll say to a customer, “I’m sorry, I’ve been working so hard this show and I’m exhausted. So forgive me if I say something stupid.”

And IMMEDIATELY what do they say: “Oh no no no, you’re doing fine! Don’t worry about it.”

If I HADN’T acknowledged my very obvious lack of mental clarity, it’s not like they wouldn’t have noticed it.

They would have seen it anyway, but instead of telling me it was no big deal, the thought would have festered in their minds and made them uncomfortable.

“What’s wrong with this guy? Is he on drugs? It’s creeping me out.”

With this message, it’s very clear that our friend here is not a native English speaker.

I don’t think it would have killed him to slip in there, “Sorry for my mistakes, but English is not my native language!”

That – plus a little bit of double-spacing and more direct language – would have done wonders for his outgoing message.

However, once we look at the profile page, it’s all completely irrelevant anyway.

No posts, no story highlights, not even a link to the website.

It’s agencies like these that give a bad name to the industry.

But  on the other hand, it’s also agencies like these that make it so much easier for the rest of us to look good by comparison.

Example #25 – The Purpose Of Your Opening Message

As a reward for reading through this entire post, I will tell you what the purpose of the opening message is.

The purpose of the opening message is to GET THE MODEL’S ATTENTION.

You are not going to CONVINCE the model to sign with you from the opening message alone.

She is going to look at your profile, story highlights, bio, and website before she decides if it’s worth her time to respond or not.

Many agency owners make the mistake of trying to do everything in the opening message, when in reality all this is supposed to do is prompt the model to explore the rest of your account.

This message is a perfect example of that.

Look at all the things this guy is trying to cram into a single message:

“Make more money with less work, let’s set up a call, give us a free trial, we’ll scale you to $10k…”

Yes, everybody wants those things. But that’s what every other agency is offering.

As a result, it doesn’t stand out.

And if it doesn’t stand out, it’s not going to get anyone’s attention.

And again, we see this profile is extremely low effort.

My dude isn’t even showing his face in his profile picture.

WHY?

Example #26 – If You’re Going To Do Voice Notes, Do Them With A Strong Voice

My friend here gets points for having a cool British accent, I’ll give him that.

Other than that, this message is awful.

He sounds like he’s recording it under the sheets of his bed and his parents are in the next room and he doesn’t want them to hear that he is trying to recruit for his agency.

My brother, use a strong voice.

Talk with conviction, power, and confidence.

Even if you have to fake it.

Just PRETEND like you’re the man.

The words you say don’t even really matter, what matters is HOW you say them.

And the way this guy talks is not going to moisten the panties of any potential model when she thinks about working with him.

So Taylor here actually gets a few things right in his profile.

The first thing he does well is that he makes it very clear that he is a real person.

This – plus the voice note – will establish a certain level of trust with potential models that let them know who they are dealing with.

Another thing he does well is that he his bio makes it clear that he runs an OnlyFans agency – or at least a modeling agency.

What I DON’T like about this page is that it just looks like a personal page.

I understand that he probably did this to establish credibility, but to a model it may seem like the equivalent of a guy trying to run a startup out of his garage.

Admirable in some sense, but shows that his operation isn’t successful enough to warrant a proper office.

Another thing I don’t like is that his pictures are not particularly impressive.

They’re just pictures of him in different locations that aren’t especially luxurious, stunning, or remarkable in any way.

Finally, I’m sure my dude is a hustler, but he looks like he would struggle to grow a beard.

Not that being follicularly-challenged (is that a word?) is a bad thing.

He just looks very young – which implies lack of experience.

And my dude, where’s your agency website?

Example #27 – Pinky Swear?

It’s very likely that this person has never written an ad in their life.

No offense to our buddy Uros here, but the mention of a 100% guarantee kind of gives it away.

It’s almost like he thought to himself, “How can I make this sound better? I know! I’ll give them a 100% guarantee!”

• Guarantee of WHAT exactly?
• Are they paying you?
• Are you paying them if you fail?

He might as well have said “pinky swear!”

Other than that, this message suffers from the same problems as nearly every other one we’ve seen in this article: generic and boring.

If the purpose of the outgoing message is to get the model’s attention, then the purpose of the profile is to establish credibility and authority.

When you have a private profile, it’s nearly impossible to establish either.

My man Uros here seems to have missed this point, opting instead to go for “mysterious agency owner.”

He probably assumed that this – combined with his rock solid 100% guarantee – would cause the models to overwhelm him in droves.

And his bio?

More specifically, what does “praisedalord” while popping bottles of champagne have ANYTHING AT ALL to do with modeling, agencies, or OnlyFans?

No?

THEN WHY THE F*CK IS IT IN YOUR BIO MY DUDE.

But it gets better…

Bro…

Please can someone explain to me why this gentleman thought it would be a good idea to link to a Serbian website?

Did he think models would look at it and say, “WOW OMG, this guy is from Serbia! I definitely want to sign with him now!”

I can’t speak Serbian, but it’s not immediately apparent to me that this website has anything to do with OnlyFans, modeling, or agencies.

Swing and a miss.

Example #28 – Is This The WORST One Yet?

We’ve reviewed a lot of outreach attempts so far, but this one might be the absolute worst.

The opener of, ‘Can I ask you something?” is actually AMAZING if you are in a face to face interaction.

When I work trade shows, my go-to opener for customers walking by involves the statement, “I have a question.”

There is a difference between the two.

One is asking for permission, the other is making a statement.

The reason this works in a face to face conversation is that there is a HUGE amount of social pressure on people to be polite in person.

Also, if they want to END the conversation, they have to literally walk away from you.

Online, not only is there no social pressure to be polite, but people can simply ignore you.

This opener fails because it does not adequately hook the reader.

You want to ask me a question?

Why are you wasting my time by making me respond to your stupid message when you could have just asked your question to begin with?

Is this what engaging with you is going to be like?

Playing these dumb conversation games instead of just getting to the point?

Wow, crazy how all these agencies all claim to “increase profit and reduce effort.”

Mark another one down for copying the Bunny Agency’s bio.

The posts here are equally unimpressive, just a few earnings screenshots.

Girls don’t really care about these and (rightfully) believe that they can be easily faked.

Example #29 – Never Go Full Retard

Damn it Nikolaj, you ALMOST got my hopes up that we had found a good one.

He started out on the right foot by mentioning the name of the creator. So far so good.

What I REALLY liked was that he stated the value add immediately:

“I run an agency that helps creators get to six figures a month on OnlyFans.”

Clear statements like this do an excellent job of grabbing attention.

The next sentence is not perfect, but at least it is CLEAR.

“We will manage everything so it makes your job much easier.”

Could be better, but it’s good enough to get the point across.

After this though, it’s all downhill.

You guys have to understand something not just about models, but about customers in general.

They don’t know 1% of what you know.

They have no idea what questions to ask.

Your presentation is meant to take them down a very specific path that CLEARLY shows why working with you is preferable to NOT working with you.

By putting the ball in their court and asking them to ask questions so early in the interaction, you are taking a huge risk that they have any idea what kinds of questions to ask.

And once again, the profile is where it all falls apart.

No bio, just a Twitter profile for the link… really Nikolaj?

This guy actually had a half-decent message. With the right profile and enough volume, I’m sure he could have recruited some models.

But when they go to his profile and see a 19 year old throwing gang signs in a dark lounge with mood lighting, what do you think they will think?

Just for funsies, I clicked on his Twitter link.

At first glance, it only seemed bad.

But as I was clicking out, my eye caught the text at the bottom.

I had to see what this was about…

Now look, I’m all about fighting against the woke agenda that certain factions are trying to push on Western societies.

But this is a very clumsy – if not downright offensive – attempt at doing that.

My brother, haven’t you seen Tropic Thunder?

Never go Full Retard.

Wrapping It Up

Sadly – but perhaps unsurprisingly – there wasn’t a single agency here that got everything perfect.

However, I believe that if you piece together elements from the agencies that did certain things right, you can Frankenstein yourself a solid profile and outreach.

Or, you could just get someone to hold you by the hand and show you exactly what to do.

But that said, I think I’ve included plenty of information in here about how to do it on your own.

Good luck out there my dudes!